Friday, June 22, 2012

Climb

[Entry for this week's 3WW]

Wanderer's struggle,
over foggy, slippery slopes,
denied lenient trail.

5 comments:

Mojo Writin said...

Powerful condensed way to sum up a struggle.

sharplittlepencil.com said...

How poets can take a 3WW prompt and make it effective, lovely haiku is beyond my grasp! The nature of haiku and senryu, their brevity with attention to sound and natural phenomena... you have the knack. Thanks for stopping by my blog, and I'm glad I found yours! Peace, Amy

Sheilagh Lee said...

lovely haiku and I am amazed how anyone can do so in three lines.

Vivek said...

@Mojo Writin

Thanks!

@SharpLittlePencil

I am still learning from all the wonderful posts put up by people on 3WW. Thank you for stopping by :-)

@Sheilagh

Thank you Sheilagh!

Teal™ said...

Hmmm , good work!

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