[Entry for this week's 3WW]
Such bright light,
clouding shut eyes, yet
darkness within hampers one's seeing.
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What I seek are little windows,
Apertures I can slip through.
To sneak in and sneak out
Of past and future,
Pulverize reason,loop ahead
and behind,taunt nature,
Tear and rewrite its
Chronological nomenclature.
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Such bright light,
clouding shut eyes, yet
darkness within hampers one's seeing.
---
What I seek are little windows,
Apertures I can slip through.
To sneak in and sneak out
Of past and future,
Pulverize reason,loop ahead
and behind,taunt nature,
Tear and rewrite its
Chronological nomenclature.
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4 comments:
you sound like a rebel.....great stuff
I can't honestly say I really understand the second piece, but I love the secretiveness, the shadiness of the first and somehow it fits with the second perfectly... until the last two lines which mean nothing to me personally. I'll just take the first one with me I think *smile*
I think most of us would like to be time travelers, witnessing the truth, revealing the future. Would we be as bold as you as to tear up and rewrite? I doubt it; let's take one step at a time. You first piece however was quite philosophical true.
If only!
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